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General Scales
April 26th, 2010, 09:37 AM
Bought you a week after release.
Hated you,
Despised your existence,
thought you should know.

Uncooperative,
Demanding
Sensitive to release
Hated you more.

Lost all I had
cept you,
Forced to force you
I started to understand.

Parked my first 400
doe eyed amazement
Loved you a little
more then you know.

Wind and rain
Straight and true
You and I
Cosmic in greatness.

Beat and worn
Thrown perfect
time and
time again.

Till the wind carried you
to watery graves
off Downriver shores.

:chug:You will be missed greatly:waaah:
Ken Smith
April 26th, 2010, 02:52 PM
That is too good and priceless. My first smile of the day - thank you.
emmarose
April 26th, 2010, 03:24 PM
wow... now i totally want to write poems for all my discs...

peace,
em
General Scales
April 26th, 2010, 03:52 PM
Lol, I only wrote this because I lost this disc after two years @ Downriver on Saturday. Beautiful flat hard drive. It starts to turn right a little like I want and right when it should go back to straight, the massive wind gusts that were prevalent on Saturday kept it turning. :bricks:
cefire
April 26th, 2010, 05:51 PM
i as well have lost
to dark and watery graves
my true flying friends
JR Stengele
April 26th, 2010, 06:01 PM
Made my eyes water man.... absolutely breathtaking and heart felt. My condolences.
Ol' Bob
April 26th, 2010, 06:03 PM
Wind blows!
cefire
April 26th, 2010, 08:03 PM
nice!
Ol' Bob
April 26th, 2010, 09:16 PM
Damn! Did you just "nice" me?
Timber
April 27th, 2010, 07:11 AM
Also that day I
Felt the wrath of wind and waves
Farewell sweet Xpress



I feel your pain, Saturday was brutal at DR
:slapface::headbang: :(
Joshua Olmsted
April 27th, 2010, 07:23 AM
Damn! Did you just "nice" me?

Is that better or worse than being "liked" on facebook?:confused:
T-Bird
April 27th, 2010, 07:57 AM
Into the blue lake
the wind did carry you once
sinking a tear fell
Ol' Bob
April 27th, 2010, 09:04 AM
Is that better or worse than being "liked" on facebook?:confused:

All I know is, soon after I read that, I walked out and bumped straight into a tree.
snap7times
April 27th, 2010, 09:22 AM
whip out the wallet
swipe that plastic
for some more plastic
to wipe those tears away



and yes, I got an F in poetry at Western Oregon... I told the professor, Deaf and written poetry do not mix heh...
Ol' Bob
April 27th, 2010, 09:37 AM
Lysdexics like me don't do well with reading it either.